[RESULTS UP] ASSIGNMENT 4: THE SEVEN SINS

Gluttony (Gula)

Envy (invidia)

Pride (superbia)

Greed (avaritia)

Sloth (acedia)

Wrath (ira)

Lust (luxuria)

Kiara Ezmeralda!


Cassidy-Rose evaluation
Theme 8/8
Model's face 12/13
Style 9/9
Overall picture 10/10

TOTAL 39/40

Joan evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model’s face 12.5/13
Style 8.5/10
Overall Picture 9/9

TOTAL 38/40

Well, this is by far my favourite picture of the week ! You really managed to portray the sloth in a very good way. More than that, the text you add explain clearly what you wanted to do in that picture, and that’s clever. The whole concept is really smart. The only « bad » point would be for the style, it’s not fashion enough, but then, your work on edits are gorgeous and so is your picture ! Congratulations !


Pia evaluation

THEME 8/8
MODEL'S FACE 13/13
STYLE 7/9
OVERAL PICTURE 10/10

TOTAL 38/40

After the beautiful picture you did last week, i was really impatient to see what you can do this week , and to be honest i'm completely amazed ! Your picture is stuning !
You've perfectly understood what you had to do. The theme of sloth is done in a symbolic way and the result is here.
Kiara is gorgeous and her slightly haughty look gives her a real charm. Furthermore, her hair color goes well with the rest of the picture.
That's for the style that it miss 2 points. The leaves outfit is good but i would have prefer a "real outfit" like a dress or anything else. On the other hand, it's well accessorized !
Bravo, continue like this and the finale is opening its arm to you !

Sofia!


Cassidy-Rose evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model's face 11/13
Style 9/9
Overall picture 8/10

TOTAL 36/40


Joan evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model’s face 10.5/13
Style 9.5/10
Overall Picture 8/9

TOTAL 36/40

You’re one of my favourite in this competition and so each week my expectations are higher and higher. That’s probably why this week, at first, I was a bit disappointed. But then, the theme was to represent the Lust in a fashion way and you nailed it ! Loved the idea of the sexual mistress. Having said that, there’re things that are not fitting like Sofia’s expression she seems to be too sweet to dominate those men, I’d have better appreciate a bit more of attitude, and a bit more of sexual appeal in the styling. I’d have preferred to see some red as well in the settings. Good job though !


Pia evaluation

THEME 8/8
MODEL'S FACE 11/13
STYLE 8/9
OVERAL PICTURE 7/10

TOTAL 34/40
Last week i wasn't convinced by Sofia's pose that didn't worked for me. But this week i love your picture ! You associate lust with a modern way and the result is amazing !
Lust is a theme that seems to be easy, but it's not that simple to do something that was never made before. And the result is good. You understood what we asked you.
Sofia is gorgeous ! She looks so sexy ! The pose chosen works well and give movement to the picture.
Her clothes are nice too ! I love her shoes and her outfit just sublimates her.
For the overal picture, i love the idea you did. I just don't really like the background that is too neutral for me. Jesper (i recognized him, and he's so hot !) and the other man would have been a little more expressive and it must have been perfect !
Good work, you've got all the qualities to go far ! Continue like this !

Leeloo!

Cassidy-Rose evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model's face 12/13
Style 9/9
Overall picture 8/10

TOTAL 37/40


Joan evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model’s face 8.5/13
Style 6.5/10
Overall Picture 6/9

TOTAL 29/40

I knew you’d rock Wrath. It fits perfectly Leeloo features. BUT you chosed to make a faceshot, to have a focus on Leeloo’s expression but we can’t really judge the styling then. Having said that you did a wonderful job on the edits, I love the texture of the feathers, everything seem to be real ! Take care of your graphics though, they’re great, but as we keep saying for a few week now, they’re are too sharp, you really have to blur to have a better quality effect. Expect those points it’s a beautiful picture !


Pia evaluation

THEME : 8/8
MODEL'S FACE : 11/13
STYLE : 8.5/9
OVERAL PICTURE : 8/10

TOTAL : 35.5/40
Last week, you were in the last part of my marks, but i have to admit that i'm really amazed by your picture ! Your picture is stuning !
We gave you wrath this week. For me it changes you from your "natural pictures". And the theme is respected. Leeloo is amazing and so sexy !
Her face has a real angry expression and the make up sublimates the all beauty. I would have just edit a little the lower lip to hide the white line above it.
The "cabaret" style of the picture pleased me at once ! Red is one of the colors that match with wrath and the accessories are well chosen. My only critic goes to the silver accessory in Leeloo's hair. Gold must havee been nice, because it would have remind the colors of the flams.
Nice work, your versatility will lead you far in the competition !

Jordan!


Cassidy-Rose evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model's face 12/13
Style 6/9
Overall picture 7/10

TOTAL 33/40


Joan evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model’s face 9/13
Style 7/10
Overall Picture 7.5/9

TOTAL 31.5/40

I had big big hopes for you when I choosed greed ! I had immediately the picture in mind. And… I’m a bit disappointed by your try on it. I think it lacks of gold, of jewels, of diamonds... It was the time to go BOLD and EXTRVAGANT ! It looks a bit too shy for me, like if you tried and was affraid to do more. And the styling is not enough, a long long and luxuous gown would have been smarter. So in short, your picture lacks of everything but it kind of work thanks to the perfect quality.


Pia evaluation

THEME 8/8
MODEL'S FACE 10/13
STYLE 7/9
OVERAL PICTURE 8/10

TOTAL 33/40

Last week you were in the second place of my marks. This week, i was really expecting you to do something sexy and hot for your picture. And i'm a little disappointed. You understood what is greed, and to be honest, i was a little afraid when i saw your first picture in R&CO. But the result is here even if i've a problem with the deph of your picture.
Jordan is gorgeous as always, but something is missing. At this stage of the competition, we ask you more than at the beginning and you have to do better in your picture. But here i find Jordan a little to simple with the pose and the background chosen.
Her outfit is well chosen but too simple too. You have to do some researchs to find the perfect outfit that we're not use to see in every picture ! Be careful about perfect symetry in a picture, the model don't have to be in the perfect middle of the picture !
The work is here, but try harder and you're going to be far !

Camelia!

Cassidy-Rose evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model's face 11/13
Style 9/9
Overall picture 7/10

TOTAL 35/40


Joan evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model’s face 9.5/13
Style 7/10
Overall Picture 5/9

TOTAL 29.5/40

You’ve been near the end those previous weeks, but this week you seem to have reach a higher level and that’s great. You well understood the theme, and we can clearly see Envy. Good point. Having said that, even if I love Camelia’s expression, I’m not a fan of the styling at all. It’s badly recolored and too green in my opinion. More than that, the picture you choosed for the settings is beautiful but it’s far too clear next to your pictures quality. In short, the edits are not good, you need to work again on it.


Pia evaluation

THEME 7/8
MODEL'S FACE 10/13
STYLE 6.5/9
OVERAL PICTURE 7/10

TOTAL 30.5/40

Last week i didn't like your picture that didn't match for me. But this week you've understood what we asked you. Even if you could make some improvments, you gace to envy the way of meaning i thought about.
The theme is respected and green is for me the perfect color to symbolize this sin.
I love Camelia's pose. She looks like those bad queens in disney movies that want to kill the beautiful princess, and it works !
But i don't really like the dress chosen. There's a strange texture that give a blurred effect. I appreciate the work on the makeup and her outfit is well accessorized.
For the overall picture, i'm shared. You had the idea but you could have work a little more on the background. You gave Camelia a fantastic look so work with it in the background !
You all the time understand the theme, so work harder and you'll do something that impress us !

Gladice

Cassidy-Rose evaluation

Theme 6/8
Model's face 9/13
Style 7/9
Overall picture 7/10

TOTAL 29/40


Joan evaluation

Theme 4/8
Model’s face 7.5/13
Style 6/10
Overall Picture 5.5/9

TOTAL 23/40

I know you had one of the hardest sin, the Pride, but you could have done it so much better ! Actually, I don’t see Pride here, I don’t what the bird is doing here, it’s peace, not Pride. More than that I don’t like the styling at all ! This gown does not suit Gladice and I don’t like the colour as well. What you did with her makeup is a big risk, it makes her face looking strange. Then what about the settings ? Honestly I didn’t understand your concept, even with your text… You should have play with reflects, mirrors… and why not, use the myth of Narcissus. It’d be such a shame to see you go…


Pia evaluation

THEME 4/8
MODEL'S FACE 6.5/13
STYLE 4.5/9
OVERAL PICTURE 5/10

TOTAL 20/40

Last week you were at the thirs place of my marks. But this week i'm so disappointed ! I know that pride isn't the easier sin but you would have do something better ! Here, we don't find anything about it !
So the theme isn't respected.
About Gladice's face, she looks strange. i'm not convince by the chosen pose and her hands seem to be so big near from the rest of her body !
I like the dress you chose, but i'm not really convince by the make up that is too homogeneous and doesn't match with the rest of the outfit.
For the overal picture, i have to say that i don't understand what you wanted to mean with that background. The white bird symbolize peace and not pride and the mountains symbolize freedom, so what is the meaning of those ?
I'm sorry to see you go, but this time, you didn't succeed. You were such a great contestant !

Allison

Cassidy-Rose evaluation

Theme 6/8
Model's face 9/13
Style 7/9
Overall picture 7/10

TOTAL 29/40


Joan evaluation

Theme 6/8
Model’s face 10/13
Style 6/10
Overall Picture 6/9

TOTAL 28/40

I know you had a busy busy week. And we can clearly see that you lacked time to really finish you picture. The way you play with the theme is nice but it’s not fashion at all. Even for last week assignment it couldn’t have work (cause it’s not modern) but here no modernity needed, but it doesn’t work. You should have get inspired by the Louis Vuitton ad campaign, and work with Allison doll face. Anyway, here again I know you hadn’t much time but it seriously lacks of quality. Gaving said that, we can clearly see glottony and I really like Allison cute face !
Hope to see you next week !


Pia evaluation

THEME 5/8
MODEL'S FACE 8/13
STYLE 4/9
OVERAL PICTURE 4/10

TOTAL 22/40

Last week i was impress by your picture that was so modern and glamour. This week i'm really disappointed ! Gluttony is one of my favorite sins and there are so much way to do it !
For me the picture doesn't work with the word "fashion". The theme of gluttony is here but we wanted to see a modern outfit with why not a "Alice in Wonderland" background, but modern !
I'm not convince by Allison pose too. We don't see her expression well and you didn't work on make up that could give something good to the picture.
Fot the style, i'm sorry, but i don't like. Everyone has already seen pictures with Alice in Wonderland, and it's too common.
You worked in the background and we can feel it, but it's a little mess too. We don't know where to put the eyes because there are lots of things in the picture. Be careful, the focus has to be on Allison, not in the background !
You've got all the possibilities to go far, so wake up and show us what you're able to do !

ALLISON!


Congratulations to you Gladice, you have been an amazing contestants, and I'm sure you'll go far! Hugs and Kisses from the Judging team!