[RESULTS UP] ASSIGNMENT 4: THE SEVEN SINS

Lust for Sofia! She will definatly break her "kind girl" image, and I love it

\(-.-\) (/-.-)/ sorry, too lazy to do my picture
This will be fun... :3

Damn XD there's no eating pose O_O are you doing this on purpose for me XD jk :p

Anger ... very interesting as sin ...
Well I'll think about that !
Should you we respect our makeover for this photo ?

ONLY 4DAYS FOR THIS?! TT^TT I'm gonna have makeup tests this week and my art exhibit is from 8th to 10th june O_O

You had 4 days for the last assignments as well...
You're not obliged to respect your makeovers

Really interesting theme !
My sin is really good (well, bad) and that's funny because sometimes... i'm greedy

Thank's Joan.

Like a lot this assignment !!
i have an idea about yours Alison xD

Oooh, love this assignment ! It's a pity we can't give the contestants some ideas (or can we ? (don't think so)), cause I have a great one for you, Allison ! (thinking about a recent... thing with see a lot in fashion magazines)

I know it can be frustating but I'd ask you to keep your ideas for yourselves! Even I, have some ideas for the contestants I'd love to see them done but can't say anything of course!

I think I got you Sahara, and it's my idea as well

Girls !
Dont Forget to do some researches to get some ideas and inspiration.
Also please never forget that it's a fashion competition, cause I noticed that you are all using kind of basic styles and poses. I wanna see real fashion now !
More the competition is going, more I'm gonna be hard on judging because judges and I are giving you lot of tips and advices so I wanna see progression !
I know you got a lot of creativity and potential so it's time to use it at 200% !

Impress us !
Good luck

HI girls !

I'm back to post because as you noticed, my comments wasn't included on your evaluation for assignment 3, because i was missing of time last week-end, so now i wanna take a little time to give to each of you my opinions and advices for your work and helping you a little bit for your future assignment photos !



Sofia

When we look at your photos since the first assignment, it's clear that you always did an amazing job, and the reason here is the fact that your bigger strenght is definitely your Versatility, and who knows that versatility is one of the principal key to go far in this competition. We can see a real progression through your photos and you need to be proud of this, and especially use this versatility to keep and keep improving, because you have to take care to keep going this way and not losing your focus because it could be fatal. Sometimes in competition, a model can start very strong but unfortunately, can also sometimes regress after a couple of assignment, so my principal advice to you is to keep using your versatility to feed even more your whole creativity because right now you are on the right track. A little parenthesis : Sofia's hair color is not the right one with the makeover, her hair need to be more red as your makeover picture, this red hair make here more unique !

Allison

I wasn't completely impressed by Allison since this Tiana's photo, wich is just totally stunning !
I really hope that this photo is now proving a progression and that you'll not regress on the next assignment because now i really see Allison's potential and we can also now see the real fashionista inside of her through this picture. That's the Allison we wanna see assignment after assignment. Your strength over this competition is Allison's unique face, but it also can be your weakness because you have to take care of giving her THE look that will rock her photo. Another strength i've noticed on you is your great sense of fashion, as we've seen on the first assignment, you where almost the only one who really put a different and high fashion look on Allison. So you have to keep using this sense of fashion to realize a perfect photo. I'm also glad that you seems now taking care about your picture's quality so i think now we can see a great progression from you.

Kiara

You have a really big strength about your photos, and this strength is that we always see WORK. You never present a photo just fastly done, we can always see that you really work on every details to create a stunning photo with a real atmosphere. Another strength is your photo's quality, even if i wasn't completely impressed by your kida's picture quality, generally your photos are always perfect, but keep taking care of this. I think your weakness here is Kiara's face, because it's undeniable that Kiara's has a beautiful look but sometimes she can look like a teenager, so you always must take care making her look like a real woman, a real fashionista. Also take care about her expression, because her eyes are pretty round so sometimes she can seems dolly & unexpressive. I can't wait to see your next photos and i really hope that i will be blown away because i know you got the potential to !

Gladice

With your Mulan's photo, i think you are really proving that you're still a very strong contestant in this competition.
We can really see progression through your photos. Your strength is the fact that you really know how to light & edit a picture to make it shine and stand out from the other contestant's photos. Because honestly, i think you are the only one who really create a perfect lightning to make your model's face really Pop ! But your weakness is also Gladice's face. I noticed that over almost all your pictures, Gladice is beautiful but she has a severe expression. I'm not really sure if it's because you put maybe too much dark around her eyes but i think sometimes she should look a little more soft and serene, but still stunning !

Jordan

Jordan's strength is her stunning and natural face, on every natural picture, she always looks completely beautiful.
Where i'm worrying a little bit is the fact that we still don't really know of what she's really looking like with a real fashion makeup, like a real fashionista ! because as you know your Fashion makeup photo was definitely not a success, but i'm still wondering if it was only a mistake or is Jordan can make a stunning high fashion photo or if she's only made for natural and commercial pictures. You weakness is that your picture are beautifuls, but too much basic in my own opinion, i really hope to see more fashion, more posing, more angles , juste more of your creativity and potential ! Because having a pretty face cannot always save from the elimination, i know Jordan has a huge potential, but now i really want it to show up !

Leeloo

Leeloo Leeloo Leeloo... I'm definitely confused about Leeloo because first of all , leeloo has such an unique style and stunning face, but i don't understand the fact that for last 2 assignments you seems to not really understand the assignments themes, or you don't exactly know where to find your creativity, your ideas. Even if ,you remember , your Soft makeup shot was completely stunning, lucky you are that even if you didnt really respected the theme, your picture was stunning, but you really have to take care of it now because making a beautiful picture without respecting the theme won't always save you from the elimination, that was the case of Reese for last assignment, her photo was stunning, but it was nothing to do with the modern concept of a mermaid. So i really hope that you'll fix it and never hesitate to ask questions and advices to Fashion coaches. I really think your only issue in this competition since 2 weeks is that you need to clearly understand and apply the assignment theme, because Leeloo has everything it takes to go far !

Camelia

Camelia is one of the most mysterious model, my problem is that she started the competition strongly but now seems to regress a little bit, and it really worrying me because i know you can do so much better ! First Assignment , your photo was in the first one, but know you are on the bottom and you really need to Stand out and use Camelia's whole potential. Your problem is your inconstancy, because if your noticed, first week your picture was one of the best, second assigment, your soft picture was beautiful but Camelia's expression was sad, and now your Jasmine photo was really well done, the concept was great, but your picture's dimension was not really good so it's hard to judge on Camelia's face. I want to see back the Camelia on the Little black Jacket photo, Camelia's makeover was meant to make her look like a real haute couture model, so use this side of her and you will definitely be back on the top !



SO ! Here's my comments and advices about your general work ladies !
Also i want to say at this point, DON'T BE AFRAID OF EDITING YOUR PHOTOS !
Because look how just editing a little bit, just editing the lightning effects can completely change a photo and give you all more points on your evaluation !

There's so much tutorials that can help you all even if you are not a pro-editer ! Don't never hesitate to just take a look on them, this just only can help you








I hope this will help you and WORK IT NOW FASHIONISTAS !

Thank you very much Cassidy !
Indeed I agree I think I did not understand what you wanted ...
I'll really do my best for this theme with all my heart hoping you enjoy it.

Thanks Cassidy, I will do my best and not decieve all of you !

Thanks a lot Cassidy. I'll do my best to keep in the first place! I'm a little bit afraid of course, cause I could fall any time, but I'll fight harder and harder. Thanks for your comment, I'm very touched!
(and I'll change Sofia's hair to respect the makeover )

Thanks for the really detailed feedback Cassidy I appreciate that and... yea I kinda really needed to hear about strengths and weaknesses :3

Thanks for the feed back Cassidy ^^

It's like 26 hours before deadline and I'm the first one to post her result XDD

So here it is:

Spoiler:

PS: Switch to Fullscreen :3

AMAZING KIARA!

o.O.....WOW!!!!

WOW! is everyoen going to wait til the last minute!?

god ! this picture is phenomenal ! :O

Very nice entry! Even if I didn't liked Kiara at first (she has a doll face) you always manage to do something great with her and make her look stunning!

Ben, I don't think they are waiting for anything, they're working on their pics. Let's not press them