[RESULTS UP] ASSIGNMENT 1: The Little Black Jacket

Kiara !

Cassidy-Rose Evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model's face 9/13
Style 9/9
Overall Picture 9/10

Total
35/40

The only reason you're standing back to Camelia in my ranking is because her face is stronger...Because I actually love everything about your picture, the themes is respected, the quality is perfect, the good size is even better, Kiara style's is just amazing, i love every little details you added to the photo, but i think Kiara's face needs to be stronger, Kiara already has a beautiful baby face, but i want to see her looking more like a real woman, more fierce !

Joan Evaluation

I know you worked hard on it and it worth ! Kiara looks really beautiful and I love the rock style you gave to her. Having said that, I’m not really fan of the over edited clothes, the bag and the necklace are superficials and make the style looks cheap. I’m very impatient to see what you have for us for next week !

Pia Evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model's Face 11,5/13
Style 8,5/9
Overall Picture 9/10

Total
37/40

This week, your image is my favorite. I love Kiara's style on this picture : a small black jacket highlighted by the bra, the accessories exactly measured, and a sublime model. We see that you worked on edits and the result is amazing ! Kiara has this expression of "femme fatale" but which is so angelic at the same time, I approve totally! The only little thing to be improved for me is the neatness of the photo. It would have needed to try to play with the fuzziness more than with the hardness, because too much hardness returns an almost vague image (hair, or shadow) would have deserved to be "a little less solid")! Good work in any case!

Leeloo !


Cassidy-Rose Evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model's Face 13/13
Style 8/9
Overall Picture 8/10

Total
37/40

You are really not far away from Gladice because i love this picture too ! The theme is respected and what i love the most about this photo is Leeloo's face, wich is just s-t-u-n-n-i-n-g ! Her eyes are strong as hell and i love it! i Was expecting a lot from her because of this strong face and you just nailed it ! Good choice of jacket, not the best i've seen but it works for Leeloo's style. My only real criticism about this photo is the fact that i think its lacking of softness, and also take care with little details like some of her fingers looking a bit weird, probably because of the cutting. You did an Amazing job overall !

Joan Evaluation

Here you have a fierce model ! Her eyes are so captivating, I absolutely cannot look outside her stare. The look is smart and simple which I love a lot. Having said that, I’d love a bit more of accesoiries, and a ponytail for a smarter and fiercer look. I absolutely love this picture ! Well done !

Pia Evaluation

Theme 7,5/8
Model's Face 10/13
Style 7,5/9
Overall Picture 8/10

Total 33/40

I liked your photo. The pose of Leeloo is very well chosen and its look is very nice. Nevertheless, I find your picture too net, what gives a pixelised aspect. I would have also removed a section of wall of every side. But finally, it's good job, Congrats !

Jordan !


Cassidy-Rose Evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model's face 11/13
Style 8/9
Overall Picture 5/10

Total
32/40

Great shot ! I love her jacket, her face is beautiful but once again i'll say that it could be stronger. You have a great size and quality & what i actually have to say is that i like this picture, but there's something special that just missing on it , there'snt this special thing that could make me love the picture more. Maybe the pose is too basic, i really don't know but still that this is a great shot, but i'm expecting more from your next photos ! I know you can use Jordan's potential to create a stunning picture!

Joan Evaluation

I’m really impressed by how your picture look. Her elegance comes from its simplicity, and I love that. The jacket is beautiful and needs anything more. Jordan looks gorgeous, having said that it would have been better if she looked straight in the camera. This picture is my favorite of the week cause it looks like what Lagerfeld did !

Pia Evaluation

Theme 7,5/8
Model's Face 12/13
Style 7,5/9
Overall Picture 9/10

Total
36/40
You have make of the good job! Jordan is very beautiful and the theme is respected. You knew how to put the jacket in the center of the attention of your photo and it is something that you do not have all makes a success. The only slight drawback is the lack of contrast of your photo. But other than that, the quality is magnificent and Jordan is gorgeous !

Sofia !


Cassidy-Rose Evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model's face 12/13
Style 8/9
Overall Picture 8/10

Total
36/40

Beautiful picture, i really love Sofia's face, wich is really soft and calm. I think her overall look is also beautiful & i really appreciate the fact that you kind of created her outfit, it's definitely a good sense of creativity and uniqueness. The only thing that i don't like is some of her body's outline parts, like her fingers, i know this is not a big thing, but smallest details like that can make a picture looks not stunning as it could be. So i'm expecting from you that you'll fix this in your future assignements, hiding this kind of details is easy to do with a smooth tool.
Well done girl!

Joan Evaluation

Sofia is such a sweet girl ! And so she looks here ! I’m not really into the head to toe edit clothes, it doesn ‘t look that good, that there’d have been a lot of possibilities to recreate this look by using in-game clothing and a bit of edit. But the picture is good, and the theme fully respected !

Pia Evaluation

Theme 7/8
Model's Face 11/13
Style 8/9
Overall Picture 8/10

Total
35/40
Great Shot! I liked your photo which testifies of your strenght on the post-editing ! Sofia is very beautiful and I adore her look. What makes that you were on the third place of my ranking is that the centring is not for my taste. I would have seen an image in portrait's size so that the attention is centered on the Beauty more than on the wall behind her.

Camelia !


Cassidy-Rose Evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model's face 13/13
Style 6,5/9
Overall Picture 7,5/10

Total
35/40

Camelia was chosen for her mysterious, strong & beautiful face and with this picture, i have to say that i'm not disappointed. I really love the power in her eyes, her face is just beautiful and modelesque. I think her face would be stronger if you're camera angle was peferctly set to get her eyes a real contact with the camera. The jacket is great, but i think you could be more creative, it's too straight in my own opinion. Actually that's my only problem with your overall photo, Camelia Looks fabulous but it's too straight. You could added some shadow effects, around the picture. So my advice for you for your future assignements is to use your creativity and add thoses special things and effects that will get Camelia and your picture just incredible !

Joan Evaluation

Camelia is a really beautiful model and she looks FIERCE in that shot ! The styling is not that good though. I’d have liked an other jacket paired with less simple skirt. It looks a bit too classical, but the overall execution is too good to not be judged.

Pia Evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model's Face 11/13
Style 5/9
Overall Picture 5/10

Total 29/40

Camelia is beautiful, but i'm not really convinced by your shoot. I don't like the white dress that is too white compared to the black jacket. For the rest, I find that you have make some good work: it's well-accessorized, and the Beauty has a glance of fire which pleases me a lot! You have potential, exploit it completely!

Allison !


Cassidy-Rose Evaluation

Theme 6/8
Model's face 11/13
Style 9/9
Overall Picture 5/10

Total
31/40

What i love the most about this photo is Allison's style, really different, creative & original. I don't really like the background but i think it's not so bad even if the rule of this assignement was to use a dark gray background similar to the exemples pictures. Allison's face is also very beautiful, and i really like the pose you chose. The only thing i don't truly like about this picture is the quality. Your picture is pretty large so what i can suggest you is that if you can't get to a really good quality, then reduce your photo's dimensions a little bit to make it look better. Large pictures are great to look, but i still prefer a smaller picture with a great quality. Overall, your picture is stunning, but i really have trouble to really love a picture with this kind of quality.

Joan Evaluation

I love the contrast between the baby doll face of Allison and the military style of the jacket. It’s a very clever idea. You have to pay attention to the detail and quality of your picture now. I have a problem with your background, it’s too much for the simplicity that was requested by the assignment. Well done though !


Pia Evaluation

Theme 7/8
Model's Face 10/13
Style 7/9
Overall Picture 6,5/10

Total 30,5/40

Your image made me for a long time hesitate. I find very interesting Allison due to her expression and her look which goes to her perfectly. But I am sceptical as for the bottom you used. It's blurred, I did not understand what it represents and that wastes a little the Beauty. Nevertheless, I think that with your potential you can go very far in this adventure!

Persephone !


Cassidy-Rose Evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model's face 5,5/13
Style 9/9
Overall Picture 7/10

Total
29,5/40

I have to say that i was expecting more from Persephone. Overvall the picture is great, i really love the clothes you chose for her, my only problem is her face. It's not modeling at all for this kind of assignment, I was seeing Persephone like a beautiful strong woman with this kind of androgynous look, but here i think she just look like a rebel teenager, that not making her really looking like a real model. My advice is that you should use her androgyn look but in a soft way, if it has to be more Fierce with a touch of rebellity, take care to not making her looking this way anymore.

Joan Evaluation

Perséphone is edgy, right. But does it means « making faces » ? I guess not. I’d have prefered a fierce Perséphone. She doens’t look that beautiful on this picture, and the styling is not that strong to compensate. Hope to see her in an other kind of edgy mood.

Pia Evaluation

Theme 7/8
Model's Face 11,5/13
Style 7/9
Overall Picture 7/10

Total 32,5/40

When I saw your image for the first time, I thought "Waouhhh", there's level! Persephone is hallucinating on this photo! I like her rock 'n' roll's look and her expression goes perfectly with her style! Nevertheless, I am less seduced by the post-editing. The white lines on the edges of her jacket disturb me a little. But for the originality, I applause !

Reese !


Cassidy-Rose evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model's face 10/13
Style 7/9
Overall Picture 8/10

Total
33/40

This is a great shot ! I really love the fact that you added the guitar, great sense of creativity & originality. Once again the jacket is great, but kinda basic, especially coming from Reese, a really confident and fierce girl, i was expecting her to have this Fierce look. So here she looks pretty, but a little bit more like a musician's album cover than a real model. But i think this photo is really beautiful, i just hope to see more fierceness coming from the confidant Reese !

Joan Evaluation

I don't really know what to think about your entry Reese... The jacket is beautiful but the accesorizing is not that good. An electric guitar and glasses on the top of the head, it looks quite cheap and not fashionable. You may went in something rock in the fashion way. It looks a bit childish here. You look too kind. Hope to see you next week.

Pia Evaluation

Theme 6,5/8
Model's Face 9/13
Style 5,5/9
Overall Picture 6/10

Total 27/40

I adored the fact that you introduce the guitar in your photo. It is a beautiful effort, because that is not always easy to include an accessory. Reese has an attitude and a glance which are nice, but I find that we do not really pay attention on the jacket, while it is normally the main subject of the assignment. But "bravo" for the hair drawing which is well done !

Oddete !


Cassidy-Rose Evaluation

Theme 6/8
Model's face 7/13
Style 5/9
Overall Picture 5/10

Total
23/40

You are another one of the contestants that i was expecting a lot, and i have to say that i'm really not convinced with this first assignment picture. You first took a risk with the angle of the photo, and unfortunately that was a bad risk. I also not really like the pose, wich is not really matching with the assignement concept, also this pose doesn't highlight the jacket at all and make Oddete's face kinda arkward. This pose could be great for another photo assignment, but doesn't work for this one. I really think Oddete has a huge potential, i just think you did a mistake with this first assignment but i'm not putting you completely at the bottom of my ranking because i know you can do much better, so work it girl !

Joan Evaluation

You seem to had some issues in the searching for the jacket. You found it, but hide it with your pose and hair. The only thing we can clearly see is the skirt, which was not the aim. You need to focus on what the assignment is about. Having said that, you need to work on your graphics and learn some tips to have a better quality.

Pia Evaluation

Theme 6,5/8
Model's Face 9,5/13
Style 5,5/9
Overall Picture 6,5/10

Total 28/40

I really wanted to see what you were going to make with Oddette and to be completely honest, I expected something more spectacular. Oddette is pretty but her expression does not please me, she looks... Motionless. Concerning the clothing, I find it coherent although the jacket has some problems of cutting. Work on the attitude of your young lady and you will go far!

Roxanne


Cassidy-Rose Evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model's face 4/13
Style 5/9
Overall Picture 5/10

Total 22/40

I'm seriously sad because i was expecting a lot from you, but i just don't hang on this photo.
The reason why i was expecting a lot from you Anitat is because you made the first cycle, so basically, you should be ahead of the other girls, you should have applied everything you've learned and it just doesn't show on this picture. Roxanne's face is completely dead and she kinda look like a mean school teacher. On my ranking, you are under the elimination bar, i don't know if you'll be saved because of Pia & Joan, but if so, i really want your potential and skills to be at the top because i know you can do sooooo much better.

Joan Evaluation

Ah! Roxanne I had big big hopes for you in this second cycle. I'm feeling a bit disappointed by your entry. You did some mistakes in the styling. The hair is not very flattering and the pose is not matching with the elegant jacket. Roxanne had a fringe during her makeover which give her an incredible likeness with Rooney Mara, and such a gothic feeling with it. I hoped so hard that you'd see it and then play with it. You didn't, you may think about it and you Rooney as an inspiration...

Pia Evaluation

Theme 6/8
Model's Face 8/13
Style 5/9
Overall Picture 6/10

Total 25/40

I looked forward to your image when I saw in which point you progressed for these last months and I have to say that I was a little disappointed. Roxanne, even if she is charming stay cold and does not look at the objective, what disturbs me just a little. Furthermore you did not emphasize the jacket, which does not distance itself besides from its whole clothing. I would have liked seeing a little more...

Gladice


Cassidy-Rose Evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model's Face 12/13
Style 8/9
Overall Picture 9,5/10

Total
37,5/40

Your picture is my favorite for this first assignment. The theme is completely respected with the background. The editing is also amazingly done, i love the shinning jelweries. Gladice looks stunning and glam but i just think her eyes look a bit too bright, giving her a "zombie" look (Beautiful zombie of course!) but you should make her eyes darker. Also, as i said she looks very glamour so i think her jacket could have been more fashion to fit with the rest, it seems like a fall-winter jacket. Anyway the overall picture is just amazing and for a first assignment, you just did it girl !

Joan Evaluation

I'm feeling so disapointed by your picture, for me it's the weakest of the week. The jacket is too loose, not flattering at all. It looks too casual. And Gladice's face doesn't look good as well. Her eyes look white (shining?) as if they were not there. The earrings are strangely shining, and the pose seems surreal. I was looking for something african or ethnic with you, you probably have to work with it... Or should had worked with it...

Pia Evaluation

Theme 6/8
Model's Face 6/13
Style 4/9
Overall Picture 5/10

Total 21/40

Girl, you' re my bad surprise of the week! You' ve got so much potential and you did a shot that is not coherent ! The contrast between the skin of Gladice and her eyes is almost supernatural, what, for me does not stick with the relaxed look you gave with the jacket. As for the rest, I am shared. There're ideas, but I do not find that the clothes put Gladice in value. Catcher you!

Nicolla


Cassidy-Rose Evaluation

Theme 3/8
Model's face 3/13
Style 4/9
Overall Picture 4/10

Total 15/40

This picture just doesn't work for me, First of all, the theme is not really respected since the background must be dark gray. Also, how can we judge Nicolla's face without seeing her eyes ? Sunglasses are just not appropriated for this assignment theme. The jacket is also too basic and i don't see any creativity on this photo, I know how nicolla's is beautiful and has potential, and i'm really disappointed because i really wanted to see more but others girls just did it better and respected the theme and that's why i can't give you another chance.

Joan Evaluation

Nicolla is self confident, we all know it. And who is better than Lady Gaga to represent self confidence? The idea was nice, but the use of the glasses hide more than the half of Nicolla's face, which is not a good point at all. More than that, the assignment imposed the use of a DARK gray background, which is not your case. Second bad point. After all the time you had, I hoped for a better styling. It looks a bit too simple in my opinion.

Pia Evaluation

Theme 4/8
Model's Face 6,5/13
Style 4/9
Overall Picture 4/10

Total 18,5/40

We waited for your participation, and regrettably, I was not convinced. You do not respect the theme, it was specified that the bottom has to be dark gray. I do not adhere either to the vue: the vue is not enough centred. Concerning the look, I am more positive, I like the used skirt and glasses can be a sensible choice when they are advisedly used! It's a pity that you leave us, but continue to work!

At the beginning I had soo many ideas for this Assignment and my first decision was to go with Asian style to try something different. But however I couldn't find a fitting black jacket to a kimono, so therefore, since Kiara (and I) absolutely love fashion which contains studs, I decided to go more into the "personality representation" direction and went with that style

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