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Post by Joan Talls on Mon Jun 04, 2012 8:52 pm

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So. You are seven remaining girls. Each one of you has for sure their faults, their indulgence, their "péché mignon". That's why, the judging and coaching team have devided to assign you one of the seven deadly sins. Each one of you will have to represent their assigned sin in a Fashion way. We want gorgeous pictures, not least. To be sure you understand well the sin, its meaning and sense, you'll have to devote a part of your time to do some researches.

Allison
Spoiler:
Gluttony (Gula)

Camelia
Spoiler:
Envy (invidia)

Gladice
Spoiler:
Pride (superbia)

Jordan
Spoiler:
Greed (avaritia)

Kiara Ezmeralda
Spoiler:
Sloth (acedia)

Leeloo
Spoiler:
Wrath (ira)

Sofia
Spoiler:
Lust (luxuria)
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Rules for this assignment


- Editing is allowed


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Most important things about a stunning photo :

- Good quality & size
- Creativity and good use of the theme
- A STUNNING model

Picture allowed : 1
Categorie of shot : Be creative and use angles as you want, but faceshots seem inappropriate here.
(see the Categories of shot in the coaching section)

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IMPORTANT NOTE :
As we all always say, you are in a fashion competition, so please never present a picture with your model only standing, default sitting or walking. Custom poses are there for a reason so use them, your pictures will be much better. The competition is about high fashion & modeling so we'll be really hard on pictures that are not using a good pose !

If you are not creating your own poses, you got a lot of custom poses on the community, you can find them on the
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Deadline
Saturday 9th June


The SFTNF team wish you the best of luck !

RESULTS

The first name I'm going to call is....
Spoiler:
Kiara Ezmeralda!


Cassidy-Rose evaluation
Theme 8/8
Model's face 12/13
Style 9/9
Overall picture 10/10

TOTAL 39/40

Joan evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model’s face 12.5/13
Style 8.5/10
Overall Picture 9/9

TOTAL 38/40

Well, this is by far my favourite picture of the week ! You really managed to portray the sloth in a very good way. More than that, the text you add explain clearly what you wanted to do in that picture, and that’s clever. The whole concept is really smart. The only « bad » point would be for the style, it’s not fashion enough, but then, your work on edits are gorgeous and so is your picture ! Congratulations !


Pia evaluation

THEME 8/8
MODEL'S FACE 13/13
STYLE 7/9
OVERAL PICTURE 10/10

TOTAL 38/40

After the beautiful picture you did last week, i was really impatient to see what you can do this week , and to be honest i'm completely amazed ! Your picture is stuning !
You've perfectly understood what you had to do. The theme of sloth is done in a symbolic way and the result is here.
Kiara is gorgeous and her slightly haughty look gives her a real charm. Furthermore, her hair color goes well with the rest of the picture.
That's for the style that it miss 2 points. The leaves outfit is good but i would have prefer a "real outfit" like a dress or anything else. On the other hand, it's well accessorized !
Bravo, continue like this and the finale is opening its arm to you !


Second, this week is....
Spoiler:
Sofia!


Cassidy-Rose evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model's face 11/13
Style 9/9
Overall picture 8/10

TOTAL 36/40


Joan evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model’s face 10.5/13
Style 9.5/10
Overall Picture 8/9

TOTAL 36/40

You’re one of my favourite in this competition and so each week my expectations are higher and higher. That’s probably why this week, at first, I was a bit disappointed. But then, the theme was to represent the Lust in a fashion way and you nailed it ! Loved the idea of the sexual mistress. Having said that, there’re things that are not fitting like Sofia’s expression she seems to be too sweet to dominate those men, I’d have better appreciate a bit more of attitude, and a bit more of sexual appeal in the styling. I’d have preferred to see some red as well in the settings. Good job though !


Pia evaluation

THEME 8/8
MODEL'S FACE 11/13
STYLE 8/9
OVERAL PICTURE 7/10

TOTAL 34/40
Last week i wasn't convinced by Sofia's pose that didn't worked for me. But this week i love your picture ! You associate lust with a modern way and the result is amazing !
Lust is a theme that seems to be easy, but it's not that simple to do something that was never made before. And the result is good. You understood what we asked you.
Sofia is gorgeous ! She looks so sexy ! The pose chosen works well and give movement to the picture.
Her clothes are nice too ! I love her shoes and her outfit just sublimates her.
For the overal picture, i love the idea you did. I just don't really like the background that is too neutral for me. Jesper (i recognized him, and he's so hot !) and the other man would have been a little more expressive and it must have been perfect !
Good work, you've got all the qualities to go far ! Continue like this !

We welcome in the top 3 this week...
Spoiler:
Leeloo!

Cassidy-Rose evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model's face 12/13
Style 9/9
Overall picture 8/10

TOTAL 37/40


Joan evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model’s face 8.5/13
Style 6.5/10
Overall Picture 6/9

TOTAL 29/40

I knew you’d rock Wrath. It fits perfectly Leeloo features. BUT you chosed to make a faceshot, to have a focus on Leeloo’s expression but we can’t really judge the styling then. Having said that you did a wonderful job on the edits, I love the texture of the feathers, everything seem to be real ! Take care of your graphics though, they’re great, but as we keep saying for a few week now, they’re are too sharp, you really have to blur to have a better quality effect. Expect those points it’s a beautiful picture !


Pia evaluation

THEME : 8/8
MODEL'S FACE : 11/13
STYLE : 8.5/9
OVERAL PICTURE : 8/10

TOTAL : 35.5/40
Last week, you were in the last part of my marks, but i have to admit that i'm really amazed by your picture ! Your picture is stuning !
We gave you wrath this week. For me it changes you from your "natural pictures". And the theme is respected. Leeloo is amazing and so sexy !
Her face has a real angry expression and the make up sublimates the all beauty. I would have just edit a little the lower lip to hide the white line above it.
The "cabaret" style of the picture pleased me at once ! Red is one of the colors that match with wrath and the accessories are well chosen. My only critic goes to the silver accessory in Leeloo's hair. Gold must havee been nice, because it would have remind the colors of the flams.
Nice work, your versatility will lead you far in the competition !



Next up is...
Spoiler:
Jordan!


Cassidy-Rose evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model's face 12/13
Style 6/9
Overall picture 7/10

TOTAL 33/40


Joan evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model’s face 9/13
Style 7/10
Overall Picture 7.5/9

TOTAL 31.5/40

I had big big hopes for you when I choosed greed ! I had immediately the picture in mind. And… I’m a bit disappointed by your try on it. I think it lacks of gold, of jewels, of diamonds... It was the time to go BOLD and EXTRVAGANT ! It looks a bit too shy for me, like if you tried and was affraid to do more. And the styling is not enough, a long long and luxuous gown would have been smarter. So in short, your picture lacks of everything but it kind of work thanks to the perfect quality.


Pia evaluation

THEME 8/8
MODEL'S FACE 10/13
STYLE 7/9
OVERAL PICTURE 8/10

TOTAL 33/40

Last week you were in the second place of my marks. This week, i was really expecting you to do something sexy and hot for your picture. And i'm a little disappointed. You understood what is greed, and to be honest, i was a little afraid when i saw your first picture in R&CO. But the result is here even if i've a problem with the deph of your picture.
Jordan is gorgeous as always, but something is missing. At this stage of the competition, we ask you more than at the beginning and you have to do better in your picture. But here i find Jordan a little to simple with the pose and the background chosen.
Her outfit is well chosen but too simple too. You have to do some researchs to find the perfect outfit that we're not use to see in every picture ! Be careful about perfect symetry in a picture, the model don't have to be in the perfect middle of the picture !
The work is here, but try harder and you're going to be far !

Next up is...
Spoiler:
Camelia!

Cassidy-Rose evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model's face 11/13
Style 9/9
Overall picture 7/10

TOTAL 35/40


Joan evaluation

Theme 8/8
Model’s face 9.5/13
Style 7/10
Overall Picture 5/9

TOTAL 29.5/40

You’ve been near the end those previous weeks, but this week you seem to have reach a higher level and that’s great. You well understood the theme, and we can clearly see Envy. Good point. Having said that, even if I love Camelia’s expression, I’m not a fan of the styling at all. It’s badly recolored and too green in my opinion. More than that, the picture you choosed for the settings is beautiful but it’s far too clear next to your pictures quality. In short, the edits are not good, you need to work again on it.


Pia evaluation


THEME 7/8
MODEL'S FACE 10/13
STYLE 6.5/9
OVERAL PICTURE 7/10

TOTAL 30.5/40

Last week i didn't like your picture that didn't match for me. But this week you've understood what we asked you. Even if you could make some improvments, you gace to envy the way of meaning i thought about.
The theme is respected and green is for me the perfect color to symbolize this sin.
I love Camelia's pose. She looks like those bad queens in disney movies that want to kill the beautiful princess, and it works !
But i don't really like the dress chosen. There's a strange texture that give a blurred effect. I appreciate the work on the makeup and her outfit is well accessorized.
For the overall picture, i'm shared. You had the idea but you could have work a little more on the background. You gave Camelia a fantastic look so work with it in the background !
You all the time understand the theme, so work harder and you'll do something that impress us !



So this week, after being some weeks best models, we have in the bottom two...

Spoiler:
Gladice

Cassidy-Rose evaluation

Theme 6/8
Model's face 9/13
Style 7/9
Overall picture 7/10

TOTAL 29/40


Joan evaluation

Theme 4/8
Model’s face 7.5/13
Style 6/10
Overall Picture 5.5/9

TOTAL 23/40

I know you had one of the hardest sin, the Pride, but you could have done it so much better ! Actually, I don’t see Pride here, I don’t what the bird is doing here, it’s peace, not Pride. More than that I don’t like the styling at all ! This gown does not suit Gladice and I don’t like the colour as well. What you did with her makeup is a big risk, it makes her face looking strange. Then what about the settings ? Honestly I didn’t understand your concept, even with your text… You should have play with reflects, mirrors… and why not, use the myth of Narcissus. It’d be such a shame to see you go…


Pia evaluation

THEME 4/8
MODEL'S FACE 6.5/13
STYLE 4.5/9
OVERAL PICTURE 5/10

TOTAL 20/40

Last week you were at the thirs place of my marks. But this week i'm so disappointed ! I know that pride isn't the easier sin but you would have do something better ! Here, we don't find anything about it !
So the theme isn't respected.
About Gladice's face, she looks strange. i'm not convince by the chosen pose and her hands seem to be so big near from the rest of her body !
I like the dress you chose, but i'm not really convince by the make up that is too homogeneous and doesn't match with the rest of the outfit.
For the overal picture, i have to say that i don't understand what you wanted to mean with that background. The white bird symbolize peace and not pride and the mountains symbolize freedom, so what is the meaning of those ?
I'm sorry to see you go, but this time, you didn't succeed. You were such a great contestant !

AND

Spoiler:
Allison

Cassidy-Rose evaluation

Theme 6/8
Model's face 9/13
Style 7/9
Overall picture 7/10

TOTAL 29/40


Joan evaluation

Theme 6/8
Model’s face 10/13
Style 6/10
Overall Picture 6/9

TOTAL 28/40

I know you had a busy busy week. And we can clearly see that you lacked time to really finish you picture. The way you play with the theme is nice but it’s not fashion at all. Even for last week assignment it couldn’t have work (cause it’s not modern) but here no modernity needed, but it doesn’t work. You should have get inspired by the Louis Vuitton ad campaign, and work with Allison doll face. Anyway, here again I know you hadn’t much time but it seriously lacks of quality. Gaving said that, we can clearly see glottony and I really like Allison cute face !
Hope to see you next week !


Pia evaluation

THEME 5/8
MODEL'S FACE 8/13
STYLE 4/9
OVERAL PICTURE 4/10

TOTAL 22/40

Last week i was impress by your picture that was so modern and glamour. This week i'm really disappointed ! Gluttony is one of my favorite sins and there are so much way to do it !
For me the picture doesn't work with the word "fashion". The theme of gluttony is here but we wanted to see a modern outfit with why not a "Alice in Wonderland" background, but modern !
I'm not convince by Allison pose too. We don't see her expression well and you didn't work on make up that could give something good to the picture.
Fot the style, i'm sorry, but i don't like. Everyone has already seen pictures with Alice in Wonderland, and it's too common.
You worked in the background and we can feel it, but it's a little mess too. We don't know where to put the eyes because there are lots of things in the picture. Be careful, the focus has to be on Allison, not in the background !
You've got all the possibilities to go far, so wake up and show us what you're able to do !

It has been a really tough decision for the judges, that's why we decided to make a total of your results since the beginning of the competition, as long as both results (this week and on the whole competition) are the same,
the model that will be with us next week is...

Spoiler:
ALLISON!


Congratulations to you Gladice, you have been an amazing contestants, and I'm sure you'll go far! Hugs and Kisses from the Judging team!

SCORE BOARD
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Re: [RESULTS UP] ASSIGNMENT 4: THE SEVEN SINS

Post by Camelia on Mon Jun 11, 2012 4:42 am

I may look impatient, but since everybody submitted their entry saturday, I was wondering when the results would be up ? é-è We're almost 1 day after, and still no news...
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Re: [RESULTS UP] ASSIGNMENT 4: THE SEVEN SINS

Post by Pia Santarelli on Mon Jun 11, 2012 5:20 am

Don't worry Camelia, we're still discussing. You'll got the results soon !
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Re: [RESULTS UP] ASSIGNMENT 4: THE SEVEN SINS

Post by Jordan on Mon Jun 11, 2012 5:45 am

Ok, thanks Pia Very Happy

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Re: [RESULTS UP] ASSIGNMENT 4: THE SEVEN SINS

Post by Camelia on Mon Jun 11, 2012 5:53 am

Ok, thanks Pia ^^
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Re: [RESULTS UP] ASSIGNMENT 4: THE SEVEN SINS

Post by Joan Talls on Mon Jun 11, 2012 7:41 am

RESULTS UP!

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Re: [RESULTS UP] ASSIGNMENT 4: THE SEVEN SINS

Post by Saphira Silvermoon-Chanel on Mon Jun 11, 2012 7:54 am

Thanks for the nice feedback - I'm really sorry Gladice <.<

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Re: [RESULTS UP] ASSIGNMENT 4: THE SEVEN SINS

Post by Sofia Phillis on Mon Jun 11, 2012 8:00 am

Ow, Gladice... You were one of the best contestant! Wish you the best.
Glad to continue this competition, cause I wasn't really happy with my entry! I'll do my best to present you a better work next week Smile
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Re: [RESULTS UP] ASSIGNMENT 4: THE SEVEN SINS

Post by Gladice on Mon Jun 11, 2012 9:45 am

Okay, I saw it coming, Having million exams in a week just did this ! But thanks for the experience. Next Cycle expect someone new of me ^^
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Re: [RESULTS UP] ASSIGNMENT 4: THE SEVEN SINS

Post by Leeloo on Mon Jun 11, 2012 10:02 am

Thank you very much for your comments the judges. Very Happy
I'm glad I've pleased you a picture.
Against by the quality of the image I'm really careful and I have very good hardware so I do not see where the problem comes ... I'll do some research. scratch

A thought for Gladice ... Kiss
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Re: [RESULTS UP] ASSIGNMENT 4: THE SEVEN SINS

Post by Saphira Silvermoon-Chanel on Mon Jun 11, 2012 10:39 am

Leeloo I think the problem is that you sharpen the pics too much Smile
And also it might be the too strong Contrast, how about Desaturating it a bit -
You use photoshop to edit right?
Then maybe play a bit with the Exposure (Image->Adjustments->Exposure), the Color Balance or the Curves
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Re: [RESULTS UP] ASSIGNMENT 4: THE SEVEN SINS

Post by Leeloo on Mon Jun 11, 2012 10:48 am

Kiara thank you very much ! Wink
In fact it is intended to give shadow effects but I do not understand how it plays on the final quality of the photo ...
Color balance and exposure I also rule according to the photos of course.
I'll try to have the lighter hand ... Very Happy
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Re: [RESULTS UP] ASSIGNMENT 4: THE SEVEN SINS

Post by Jordan on Mon Jun 11, 2012 11:59 am

Oh sorry for you Gladice, you were a really good contestant, wish you the best ! Kisses.
And thanks for letting me stay judges ! Me myself was a bit disapointed about my image, I promise I will do something gorgeous next week !
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Re: [RESULTS UP] ASSIGNMENT 4: THE SEVEN SINS

Post by Nicolla on Mon Jun 11, 2012 12:36 pm

WOW...that was an unexpected elimination! I didn't see that coming, I mean i love Allison, and she's my only homegurl left from bedroom 2, but i wasn't expecting Gladice to be eliminated-well, there goes the first girl from bedroom 1.
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Re: [RESULTS UP] ASSIGNMENT 4: THE SEVEN SINS

Post by Chloe on Mon Jun 11, 2012 12:45 pm

Yeah, me too i wasn't expected Gladice to go...
And i was really surprised to see Alison and Gladice on the bottom 'cause i love your pic Alison, even if the dress is not so fashion, but her pose is so cut and her, she's cute too ♥
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Re: [RESULTS UP] ASSIGNMENT 4: THE SEVEN SINS

Post by Nicolla on Mon Jun 11, 2012 12:57 pm

i completely agree, Allison was my second favorite picture!
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